He should have kept the wing grey with black speckles.
Then he should have made the upper eyelets blue which are attached to the wings, just like the upper eyelets on the original.
The logo should have been a yellow jumpman with a black line around it.
It should also have the letters flight beneath the jumpman in the force fonts also in yellow with a black surrounding line.
The colors are off on the custom the yellow is to dark, should've been more neonish.
The grey on the heeltab is too dark.
He should have put the original nike air logo on the heeltab.
The sole is totally wrong, the black part should have been white, the yellow should have been black and the white surrounding the air unit should have gotten the yellow speckled neon treatment.
He should've also made the lower netted part of the tongue black.
If he would have done it my way, it would not only be better looking but also would have had the same color blocking as the command forces.